英语作文 A thing in my memory.docVIP

对话中应该用什么时态？ 事情写的太普通，缺乏新意、深度。（过生日, 给妈妈过节。。。） 形容词用的太大，和内容联系的不紧密。 没有开头和结尾，没有点题句，文章结构不太好。 语言错误。 A/An unusual thing in my memory It was Monday. I got up at 6:30 a.m., and then ate my breakfast quickly. On my way to school, I saw an accident. A red car knocked down a little boy and then the car drove away. I saw the numbers of that car and then I wrote it down quickly. I ran to that boy. He was hurt. Finally, I dialed 120 and 110 to call the ambulance and the police. Five minutes later, They arrived here I gave the number to the police and helped the boy get into the car. Although I was late for