平时学生书面表达中常见的错误类型分析 ⑴格式错误.ppt

平时学生书面表达中常见的错误类型分析 ⑴格式错误 有的考生不能正确地运用书信或日记的格式。 A)书信常有五部分： ①信头:右上角写上收信人的地址和写信日期; ②称谓; ③正文; ④结束语, 常用的有Yours sincerely/Yours truly/Yours faithfully…; ⑤签名。 B)日记格式：顶格写上月、日、年和星期，右边写上天气情况。 ⑵词序错误①并列的人称代词做主语时，I没有放在最后。例如： I, you and he are all League members.②没弄清英语中真正的主语。例如：Without a friend will feel lonely. ③修饰语错位。例如： He very likes dancing. ⑶时态错误 动词时态的错误是高考英语书面表达中最常见的错误之一,也是考生运用语言的能力差的显著标志之一。如2002关于公园收不收门票的讨论的介绍，陈述讨论的语句通常用一般现在时：Sixty of the students of our school think it is unnecessary to charge an entrance fee. They think that……不少考生表达为Some people thought that…… ⑷句子不完整 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势、语气等来理解不完整的句子，可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，又想加些补充说明时发生．例如： There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .应改为：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV ,radio ,and newspaper. ⑸内容表达错误 这种错误一般说来是审题不清所致。如2003年的书面表达，正确内容是：Ive found a flat for you. Its a small one of 25 square meters with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. The house is near No 11 bus stop on Fang Cao Street and the school is at the next stop.有不少考生表达为:“Ive found a flat of 25 square kilometers. Its in No.11 Fang Cao Street.” ⑹句子与句子之间缺少衔接造成意思过渡不平稳 例如：把He worked hard. He failed the exam.改为He worked hard. However, he failed the exam.就比较好。 ⑺习惯用语使用错误 如:将 to my surprise 表达为 to my surprised;将in my spare time 表达成 at my spare time; 将He didn’t lose heart though he failed.表达为He didn’t lose his heart though he failed. ⑻没有利用恰当的代词，给人于重复的感觉 例如：把My father is a worker. My father works in a big company. 改为My father is a worker. He works in a big company. 就比较好。 ⑼单词运用错误 写作中常见考生因分不清单词的词性而产生错误。大致有： a.将vi.用成vt.如:come the city/return the place b.将adj.用成vt.如:Please present on time. Dont absent! c.将u.n.用成c.n.如:a good news/many informations d.将adj./adv.使用错误.如:in the recently years/study hardly; e.将prep.用成v.如:Many overpasses arounded the city. The road throughed the city. f.将名词的单/复数使用不当。如：There are lots of high building. // Most of the people have private car. 句中building