话题 10 如何用英语描写节假日活动.docVIP

话题 10 如何用英语描写节假日活动Festivals，holidays and celebrations 必走三步 假设你是李华，对本班同学过生日的方式进行了全面调查，其结果如下表所示。请根据表格中提示的内容，写一篇 100 词左右的短文，说明同学们过生日的方式及想法。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 比例 方式 想法 40% 开一个生日派对 同学、朋友聚会、聊天，增进感情 20% 近郊旅游 放松心情，感受大自然 30% 获得特别的礼物 父母等送给自己特别想要的礼物，如手机等 10% 种生日树 美化环境，有纪念意义 Everyone likes to spend their birthday，but they have different ways to spend it．_______ _______________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：认真审题，提炼要点 一审格式：本文是一篇介绍性说明文，题材是同学们感兴趣的话题，即：生日的过法。这种话题也是高考的一种命题角度，即中学生不仅要关注社会热点、校园趣事、学业任务，同时也要对自己身边经历过的生活小事有自己的评价。此类话题适合中学生的思维和心理特点，易于培养学生的表达能力。 二审结构：由于本文要求根据表格内容写作文，所以，最好的表述语句要用并列句和复合句，以此把数据与内容连贯地表达出来。具体步骤是： (1) 提出调查的主题，以起到引入的效果。 (2) 对表格中的数据进行梳理，通顺地写出来。 (3) 自己对表格数据的感受以及对生日礼物的评价。 三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。 have a birthday party have a wonderful time travel on their birthday get close to the nature receive the special presents a mobile phone or a computer plant a tree to celebrate their birthday make the hometown more beautiful 第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句 Everyone has different ways to spend their holidays． We have four ways to spend our birthday． About half of us would like to have a birthday party with their friends and classmates． They can talk，sing and do anything at the party and often have a wonderful time． Some classmates like to travel on their birthday． They want to get close to nature and relax themselves． One third of my classmates hope to receive the special presents from their parents． One classmate in ten wishes to plant a tree to celebrate their birthday． 第三步：补充修改，连句成篇 Everyone likes to spend their birthday，but they have different ways to spend it．In our class，we have four ways to spend their birthday． About half of us would like to have a birthday party on their birthday with their friends and classmates．They can talk，sing and do anything at the party and often have a wonderful time．Some classmates like to travel on thei