修改语病之成分过剩和残缺(国外英文资料).doc

修改语病之成分多余和残缺(国外英文资料) Modify the average roe (1) the composition is redundant There is more than one element in the sentence. The subject is repeated in part of the predicate The predicate repeats with the object The predicate is repeated with the modifier of it The attributive is repeated in the central language Adverbials are repeated in the central language [example] 6-1 The foreign experts who apply for the job should generally pay higher salaries than or maintain the probationary period, not less than the probationary period. (there is a above or maintenance limit, which excludes below and below probation wages, which is repeated and should be deleted.) The five star brewery decided to leave the factory for two people for two years, which will be paid a monthly living allowance and free of bonuses. (the second sentence, which means only living expenses, has excluded the bonus, and no bonuses, if you repeat it, you should delete it.) Snow lotus shirt, no matter in style, quality. The packaging can be a national one. ( yes means yes, and yes in the front, and yes should be removed.) From his weak breath, he didnt die. ( weak , not dead) The reason why I didnt do well this time is because I didnt follow the teachers request carefully. (the subject superfluous cause and because repeat, because the cause or because) The writing style of Lao she is always the same as the people. (should be removed from style) The handout that you borrowed from your college last time is being printed. It can be sent to students before class. (the predicate is superfluous and should be removed.) The ten players in the basketball court are playing hard. ( beat extra, should be deleted) The famous French novelist, Balzac, has devoted his life to the writing of the tragedy of mankind. The object is redundant and should be removed. Today, I went to the west lake of yangzhou to visit the white tower, the diaoyutai and the wuting bridge and other scenic spots. ( places should be removed) The