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二、理顺要点、增加细节、连贯表达。 根据表达的逻辑性，试将要点重新安排： ①地球变得越来越暖 ②过多使用矿物燃料…… 原因 ③过度砍伐森林…… ④海平面上升 ⑤极端天气现象的增加。比如有些地方过去雪量丰富，现在整个冬天却不见了下雪而造成干旱。 后果 ⑥自然平衡遭到破坏 ⑦倡导人们过低碳生活来保护我们的地球 (表格外文字说明中的内容) ⑧自拟建议 为了表达的连贯，承接上文的“地球变得越来越暖”这个话题，建议的提出应着眼于“人如何为”，因为地球变暖的主要原因是人为造成的。 三、化解难点、灵活表达、句能达意。 1.化解难点 ①过多使用矿物燃料 too much use of fossil fuels use too many fossil fuels overuse of fossil fuels overuse fossil fuels ②产生大量的温室气体或二氧化碳 produce a lot of greenhouse gases or carbon dioxide release a lot of greenhouse gases or carbon dioxide ③过度砍伐森林 cut down more and more forests cut down too many forests ④意味着大量的二氧化碳不能转变成氧气 mean that a lot of carbon dioxide can’t be changed back into oxygen mean that less carbon dioxide can be changed back into oxygen cause less carbon dioxide to be changed back into oxygen ⑤海平面上升 The sea level is rising. The sea level keeps rising. ⑥极端天气现象的增加 there be more extreme weather witness/see more extreme weather suffer a lot from more extreme weather ⑦有些地方过去雪量丰富， places which used to be abundant/rich in snowfall used to be abundant/rich in snowfall in some places there used to be no snow in winter 现在整个冬天却不见了下雪而造成干旱。 have frequently experienced snowfree(无雪的) winters not snow at all in winter cause/lead to draughts ⑧自然平衡遭到破坏 cause much damage to the balance of nature do much harm to the balance of nature damage/harm the balance of nature very much ⑨倡导人们过低碳生活来保护我们的地球 advocate to lead/live a low carbon life to protect our earth encourage people to lead/live a low carbon life to save our earth 2.变点为句 ①The earth is getting warmer and warmer. 原因部分： ②Too much use of fossil fuels produces greenhouse gases. ③Cutting down more and more forests means that less carbon dioxide can be changed back into oxygen. 现象(后果)： ④The sea level keeps rising. ⑤People are suffering a lot from more extreme weather. ⑥In some places which used to be abundant in snowfall there is no snow in winter, causing draughts. ⑦Places which used to be abundant in snowfall have frequently experienced snow-free