第二部分 写作 第七讲 高级词汇和较复杂结构的写作与训练.ppt

Ⅱ.使用较复杂结构修改下面三段话，使其简洁、连贯、紧凑 1．Its a flat of 25 square meters. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 答案：Its a flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. The bedroom is furnished with a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 2．There is a new multimedia building on one side of the road. There used to be a playground on the other side. But there is a library now. There are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines in the library. There is a new playground in the front of the school. There are a lot of trees in and around the school. _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 答案：On one side of the road there is a new multimedia building. On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another new building — our library, in which you can find all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. A new playground is now in the front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. 3．There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing. They serve passengers heart and soul. They play an important part in the traffic of Beijing. They make some money. They work from dawn till night. One day, I left my cellphone in the taxi I took. I got in touch with the driver. He drove to my home and gave it back to me. I was very excited. _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ 答案：There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing, serving pass