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作文实例 2003年作文 Directions: Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and point out its implications in our life. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points） It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate the young. Let’s take a closer look at the drawings. In an ideal condition, the flower blooms. But when moved out of the green house, it perishes under the rain and storm. It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse can’t withstand wind and rains. Nowadays the young generation in China, like the flower in the greenhouse, live under the full protection from their parents. Parents want to show all their love to their children. They give their children all the best things they can afford and do not let their children do anything at home. Self-centeredness and arbitrariness have become a trait of the young generation. Once leaving their parents, many young people cannot make a living of their own. They get lost when stepping into the complex reality and cannot face any hardships and difficulties. Children education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by education experts, but also by people in all walks of life. The failure of children education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to children themselves. Thus, it’s high time that parents, educators and the government made concerted efforts to put an end to this situation. 注意一：选词要精 I think? I believe/argue/hold/insist/maintain As far as I am concerned/When it comes to me/In my opinion/In my view… It goes without saying that/There is no denying the fact that… 王立非，张岩，2007，p. 110 Hyland, 2006, p. 61Phrases in a HK Learner Corpus Frequency of phrases per 50,000 words 如何对待“万能句型” Directions: Write an essay of 160—200 words based on the following drawing. In