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Dear Tom, I’m sorry I couldn’t reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately. I was so occupied in going over my lessons for my final exam. Now I am writing to tell you my plans for the coming summer holidays. The first thing I plan to do is to do a part-time job in a fast-food restaurant. Not only will I earn much money but I will also gain some social experience through it. In addition, I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. I have been looking forward to going there for nearly a year. Finally and most importantly, I’ll go to Xi’an to work as a volunteer. There is no doubt that children there are in great need of care and help. I’ll help them forget about sorrow by playing with them and telling stories. I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them. Wish you a good holiday! Yours, Li Hua 2013高考山东卷作文范文鉴赏。 =》用词的地道 =》句式的高级 =》句句之间的衔接 Learn to polish As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere. 可以使文章衔接紧凑，有“英语味”的一些关联词 (1) 正相反 (2) 在此期间 (3)后来 (4)起初，首先 (5)另外，还有 (6)因为，由于，多亏 (7)从整体上来说 (8) 以我之见 I am writing to enquire about whether I will have the opportunity to become a volunteer who maintains the website regularly for the Students’ Union. I am a student from Senior Two, who is eager/dying to apply for this job. And I think I will be up to it. My reasons are as follows. To begin with, I’m interested in it and I’m warm-hearted and patient. It’s a great pleasure for me to serve my fellow students in my spare time. Besides, not only am I good at communicating with people , but also I am skillful at teaming up with others. In addition, what’s more significant is that