读后续写给80岁母亲的礼物.pptx

读后续写讲评;一、原文分析 WHO (main characters; relationship?):;WHAT: ;Main characters:; What’s the authors purpose of writing this story? What’s the best gift?;二、每段的开头语分析（用下划线标出关键词） Para1:She stood by the window, watching.;As the postman passed by, a beam of disappointment swept over her. Hopes of receiving the present from Myra seemed to be fading away. On seeing what Johnnie carried, her smile froze abruptly. ;The shine on her eyes faded away, she turning back to the ticken with a heavy gait/ step. Hardly had she decided to cut the cake when the door bell rang. The old lady rushed to the door, opening it with a trembling hand. ...Suddenly, a smile of understanding flashed across her face. She hugged the boy, tears gathering in her eyes... 钱艺 She still fail to catch sight of Myra, feeling a sudden surge of disappointment, the only fire of expectation fading away. When she intended to give up waiting, Johnnie rushed upstairs at full speed, grasping an envelop firmly. 章祎玮;两段话内容如何顺畅衔接及第二句的关键部分：;续写的第二段要包含以下内容：;四、 语言基础 随着时间的流逝 里面有一张卡片，上面写着... 一个孤独的身影站在门口，眼中充满了期待。 一个熟悉的身影出现在门口，眼中含有泪水  ;四、 语言基础 5 房间里很安静。 6 突然 7 我很想陪伴你度过生日 我最想要的是女儿的陪伴 很抱歉我不能参加生日party 9  ;四、 多种表达训练 1. 她一想到女儿可能会来陪伴她，心里感到一阵激动。  ;Her eyes twinkled with pleasure the instant she thought her daughter would come. The blood pulsed through her veins. ; 2. 一看到手里的信封，她感到很失落。;She rushed to the mailbox in excitement, only to find there was merely an envelop. Disappointed as she was, she took it out. Deeply touched, she sobbed with happiness. Through her misty eyes, she saw... 李梁钧 So disappointed was she that her body shuddered slightly. 汪燕超 The delicious cake tasted bitter today. 梅秀玲 ;3. 收到了来自女儿的礼物后，她心里乐开了花。  ;Smile climbed on the old lady’s face immediately with air filled with warmth. 舒露 A bitter smile climbed on her face. In an instant, she rushed to take the envelop, but it was not addressed. Tears ro