四六级作文 第四讲 句子和篇章.pptVIP

四级作文辅导 文体统一 四级应试作文应是正式文体的文章，不宜使用非正式的语句。 阅卷老师常发现有的考生在一篇很正式的议论文中用以下的句子结束本文：Ok, this is what I want to say. That’s my opinion. Do you agree with me? That’s all, thank you.等等 .使文章显得“不伦不类” 文字连贯 一篇好文章要注重语言的连贯性。连贯性主要体现在句子与句子、段落与段落的衔接上，这种衔接主要通过衔接来实现，以达到文章通顺、语言流畅的效果。例如： ①It is clear that television news can bring us events of importance, such as wars, games and so on, but it cannot cover stories in detail because of its time limitation. ②In contrast, printed news excels in its ability to devote much space to a story, though it cannot compete with television visually. such as，but，because of，in contrast, though这些衔接词把句子从语义上连接起来，形成一个有机的整体，读起来犹如行云流水，自然酣畅。 内容一致 要删除与主题内容不符的句子和多余的词语，否则，一是破坏了文章的一致性，二是有“凑字数”之嫌。例如： ①Scientists fear that nuclear energy will one day destroy us. ②They say that the explosion of a nuclear bomb can kill millions of people and cause disease in later generation. ③Because of limited energy resources, scientists are studying the possibilities of nuclear power. ④And any failure from a nuclear plant can work enormous damage to the area. ⑤What’s more, up to now people have not discovered a safe way to dispose of radioactive wastes. ③与主题不符，也与第② ④句不连贯，应删除 词语多样 单词、句型使用的多样化不仅增强了文章的可读性，与此同时也可以反映出考生的词汇量和语言掌握的程度。考生在举例说明的段落中尤其要注意词语的多样性。例如，在列举五种污染源时，下面的文字表达值得学习。 ①In a typical city there are five main sources of air pollution. ②Waste disposal is the least important—it causes only 3% of the total pollution. ③Heating accounts for 6%. ④The next most important sources is power plants—they account for 14%; and 17% of the pollution in the air comes from industry. ⑤But by far the most serious cause of the air pollution is cars; cars alone cause 60% of air pollution in most large cities. 符合试题要求 无论是什么形式的作文都有写作内容上的要求。考生在动笔前一定要先看清写作内容上的要求，以确保文章符合试题所有的要求。 语言流畅 阅卷教师认为，语言流畅、文章通顺、表达准确是考生得高分的基础。例如： ①Last year the British public spend two hundred million pounds on pet food alone, to say nothing of animal care bills and furniture. ②It is difficult not to feel resentful about this wh