英文写作教程第4章如何组织篇章素材.pptVIP

Tips for writing: 1)引言段首先确定主题句，再简述一下这种社会现象(可复述题目内容)，随即引入正题。例如： 【引言段】【主题句】 Some people take it for granted that some numbers can bring them good luck. 【例1】For instance, the so called lucky numbers such as “6”, “8” or “9” are widely preferred by many people. When they choose a telephone number, or car license plate number, or even the room number in the hotel they’ll stay in, etc., they’ll try their best to get such lucky numbers, leaving aside the numbers like “4” or “13” because the former sounds like Chinese meaning “death” while the latter indicates a bad luck for long in the western countries. 【例2】Especially when such numbers are put in a row like “518”, “5148”, “6666”, etc., each indicating respectively “I’ll get rich”, “Absolutely get rich ”, and “Sail smooth to success”, they are even more scrambled for by many people who are crazy for luck numbers. 【扩展段1: 承上启下】Such a phenomenon exists nearly everywhere in our life.【例举】A good case in point is the number “201314” when putting together in a row, reading: Jan. 14th, 2013, which sounds like a Chinese sentence “爱您一身一世”(Ai nin yi shen yi shi), meaning “I’ll love you all my life”. It is said that many young people were piling into wedding that day because they considered it a unique chance of their lifetime. 　　 【扩展段2】【主题句】Yet some other people don’t think in this way. 【例举】They argue that such numbers are nothing but a kind of symbol just for counting. Numbers have nothing to do with luck. It is superstitious or even ridiculous to connect one’s luck with such numbers. So, they laugh at those who think numbers can bring them good luck and think such a behavior really very foolish. 4) 结尾部分要语气集中，注意简明扼要总结正文或重述命题，并迅速导向结论语。自己的结论不可偏激，不能绝对贬低或一味肯定，要根据自己前面的阐述做到合情合理： 【结尾段】Even though the phenomenon of people’s preference to lucky numbers is probably superstitious or foolish, it will not affect the whole situation in the society.【结论1】Therefore, it is not wise to say absolutely yes or no to such a phenomenon, n