作文人物以及网上阅卷写作规范.ppt

高考作文 记叙文 如何介绍人物 好词好句 外貌特征 （整体评价、五官特征） 性格特点 出生年龄 兴趣爱好 教育背景 经历事迹 他人评价 人物写照、生平事迹 思路点拨 人称： 第一人称 I 时态： 1）自我介绍：一般现在时 2）提出请求：虚拟语气（表示委婉和礼貌） 细节的添加 信息的重组（凸显实力） 注意事项 人称 求职信、自荐信—第一人称 I 推荐信— 第三人称 he/ she 时态 自己观点，现在时将来时 名人特点，现在时过去时 必备词汇 Ordos No.1 High School students in Grade Three recommend be good at/do well in win/get the first prize in the speech contest be admitted by 文章结构 I want to have try. 主体: 1. introduce myself. 2.introduce my advantages. 3. show my hope and wishes I’m LiHua, an eighteen-year-old girl who studies in Ordos No.1 High School. Now, I’m a Grade Three student. Though I’m facing a lot of pressure, I manage to do well in my study, especially in English. I once got the first prize in 2010 Speech Contest in Ordos. In the meantime, I am good at playing basketball and computers, for I think health is of the same importance. As for me, computer is my favorite. So now, I want to recommend myself to your school. I want to major in Computer Science in your university. There is no doubt that I need further improvement. So I hope you can give me the chance. Thank you! 优美词句摘抄： 2008年湖南高考题 题目要求 写作（满分25分） 请从下列任务中选择你 最喜欢的一位，用英语谢一篇120词左右的短文。要求很具所给信息做适当发挥，且需包括一下三部分内容： 1. 对该人物的简单介绍； 2. 喜欢该人物的理由； 3. 从该人物身上得到的启示。 题型解读审题要点 如何在身体过程中就有效地把规定的写作内容和图标材料融合起来是重点考察考生的能力之一。 要点： 一，注意人称，一人称描述理由；三人称描述特点。 二，注意时态 自己观点，现在时将来时 名人特点，现在时过去时 高分范文——William Shakespeare As an outstanding British writer, William Shakespeare has won respect and love worldwide. Most of his plays and poems, which described the social lives, politics and cultures in Europe, have enjoyed great popularity. I admire him a lot. He received little education, but he was talented and able to teach himself how to write plays. He was an active person who kept pursuing what he really liked despite/in spite of the difficulties. Some of his famous works, most of which we are familiar with, have shown that he is a great patriot. What’s more, his famous comedies and