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2007年 Nowadays, the internet has become part of people’s life, and millions of young people have made friends online. Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? Nowadays, it has been a fashion to make friends online, and more and more teenagers, college students and even many adults will spend a lot of time chatting with people on the Internet. But I don’t think it is wise to make friends online. Firstly, most of people will not reveal their real identity on the Internet, which will not enable you to make true friends. Just imagine a young lady you are talking with may be an old man, and I’m sure we will feel very bad when we are exposed to the truth. Besides, the friends online can bring bad effect to people, especially for teenagers. The unhealthy stuff will both physically and psychologically influence young people and, in a certain degree, can lead an unproper way to their whole life. And last, making friends online can do bad to the relationship between you and you family and friends in real life. Being addicted to the Internet makes you ignore the reality. You will be angry about your parents’ persuading and after a long time, maybe you will find you have lost the ability of how to communicate with others properly. In a word, it is not wise to make friends online. I hope everyone can focus on the reality instead of wasting too much time making friends on the Internet. 范文四（12分） 内容：观点明确。 结构：清晰。关联词准确，各部分字数比例合理。 语言：比较流畅，有一定说服力，错误占10%。细节问题，不影响理解。整句错误较少。 With the Internet becoming an indispensable part of modern people’s life, making friends online enjoys its great popularity, especially among young people. However, is it wise to make friends online, as many parents and teachers are worrying about? As far as I am concerned, I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online. Firstly, too much attention to online friends distracts your concerns to the true friends and families in th