2014江门市第一职中对口升学英语专题检测：短文改错03.docVIP

短文改错 　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误; 2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 3. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。 1 (2013·哈尔滨模拟) Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days in my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straight A’s, Dad said, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ”Victor’s dream was to see really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then took a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw some snow on the trees. We began to play snow! No one in my family had ever touched snow before. We were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other. 2 The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow. 3 　　As we know, when senior students finish their school, most of their reference books are thrown away, which are still in good conditions. What a great waste it is! I suggested that we should recycle all this books. On the one hand, recycling them can save a lot of natural resources, which are used to make textbooks. On the other hand, the notes on the books are helpful to whoever need them. In fact, recycling textbooks has been increasing popular in such c