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增加细节前后的比较（比较、分析、学习） （2008年高考全国卷Ⅱ） 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。 要点：1、参加中文学习班。??? 2、看中文书刊、电视。 3、学唱中文歌曲。????? 4、交中国朋友。 注意：1. 词数：100左右。???? 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语已为你写好. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes Li Hua (2016全国课标卷)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 　　注意： 　　1. 词数100左右； 　　2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Im your student Li Hua. Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation. Could you correct the language and the format of the application letter and resume I have written? They are in the attachment. Dear Ms Jenkins, Im Li Hua from your English writing class last term. Im writing to ask for your help. Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go