空巢老人作文.ppt

Teaching aims Students are able to analyze and expand the given information reasonably. Rewrite the passage. We have a dream 今日事今日毕。 Today must borrow nothing of tomorrow. As for the first reason, what should you do? (We should) _____________what your gift is, and use it to ___________ and the lives of those around you. Take the first step and your dreams will come true. All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to ___________them. 某英文报社就“关爱空巢老人”这一话题进行征文。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语短文投稿。内容主要包括: 1. 空巢老人越来越多的原因； 2. 他们面临的问题； 3. 如何帮助他们。 优点：审题、分段、时态 缺点：①书写、卷面 ②基础表达 ③展开短文要点（啰嗦，Chinglish） 随着经济的发展 忙于(做)某事 是时候该做某事了 呼吁某人做某事 拿出时间做某事 … .Because … with the development of economy be busy with sth. be busy (in) doing sth. It’s time that sb. did/should do sth. appeal to sb. to do sth. spare time to do sth. … , because … Zooming 1 Para.1 空巢老人越来越多的原因； With the development of economy, more and more people choose to leave their homeland to find the chance to have a better job. (李晓红) With the development of economy and society, the number of people who bury themselves in working and studying is on the increase. (姜丽) With the development of society, more and more adult have to make great efforts to earn money for the purpose of supporting the family. (门晓菲) There are no alternative route open to them to pay all their attention to both family and work.(宋晓松) As a result, they have less time to accompany their elderly parents. (门晓菲) Zooming 2 Para. 2 面临的问题 总述 It’s unavoidable to meet with difficulties facing loneliness. //These elderly are faced with many difficulties without their relative’s company.(张雅俊) 具体问题： ①The empty-nest elderly can’t manage things that require much manual labor. ② The most important problem they face is that they are too old to care for themselves.(金迎迎 孙忠源) When they are ill, their family members can’t appear in time. (张琳) ③ Because of long-term loneliness, they may have mental problems like depression. It’s natural for