我喜欢那没有喧哗的光和热我喜欢张晓风ilovethewintersun.ppt

Topic：use examples in the above selection（Selected Modern Chinese Essays） and illustrate Zhang’s idea of prose translation 李海珍 2012211036 杨悦 2012211047 1. Zhang’s idea of prose translation 2. Examples OUTLINE Translation Ideas： Faithfulness （忠实） Smoothness（通顺） Faithfulness: be faithful to the content style Smoothness: the fluency of the language understandable native 我喜欢冬天的阳光，在迷茫的晨雾中展开。我喜欢那份宁静淡远，我喜欢那没有喧哗的光和热。（《我喜欢》张晓风） I love the winter sun spreading out behind the morning haze. I love the pervading calm and peace of the moment as well as the light and warmth quietly brought by the sun. （张培基译） Analysis: Use of amplification. When translates “我喜欢那份宁静淡远”, Zhang adds pervading（遍布的）and of the moment （当时）.It seems that the translation is not faithful to the original text; however, after we read through the whole text, we will discover that what the author appreciates is just the “calm and peace” at the moment when “the winter sun spreading out behind the morning haze”. The word “pervading” exactly gives the feeling that the calm and peace spread along with the winter sun. It is faithful to the original meaning and reproduce the beautiful sense at the very moment. The add of “brought by the sun” in the translation shows the consistency in the content. The beginning and ending can bring out the best in each other. 我喜欢在春风中踏过窄窄的山径，草莓像个精致的红灯笼，一路殷勤地张结着。我喜欢抬头看树梢尖尖的小芽儿，极嫩的黄绿色里透着一派天真的粉红。（《我喜欢》张晓风） I love to saunter in the spring breeze on a narrow mountain path bedecked with strawberries growing graciously like delicate red lanterns. I love to look up at treetops to watch tiny buds with their tender yellowish green tinged with an artless pink. （张培基译） Tinge: to add a small amount of color to sth—dynamic beauty Artless: innocent, simple, natural and honest—as lovely as a little girl Analysis: When translates, Zhang integrates the three short sentences into one compact sentence. It is more concise an