用心积累强化训练巧有米可炊.ppt

用心积累 强化训练 巧妇有米可炊 —— 2015年温州市“一模”短文改错 和书面表达分析与复习对策 温州市第十五中学 郑颖颖 二、一模短文改错题分析 1、背景材料： 一个名为Jim的中学生写了一封信。 信中他说道自己非常乐意当一名志愿者去帮助老人院的老人和生病住院的孩子。  2、考查角度： 4、总体评价与分析 相对于笔试部分的其它题型，改错还算比较简单，但是我们学生的得分却不够理想。 从抽样的30份学生答卷中，我们发现错误较多的是4.performance改为performances ;5.are改为is;以及最后一个句子10.by the mail改为by mail。 这说明大部分学生还未熟练掌握以下知识点：“performance”表演为可数名词；“giving some performance with my friends” 动名词做主语，其谓语动词用单数； 用什么工具或方式，直接用by sth, 中间不用加定冠词 “the”. 同时我们也从学生的改错中发现了一些漏洞， 如： 1.I love children but I’ll devote myself to taking good care of him. take 2.please get in touch with me by phone or by mail. touching 去掉with 3.I am willing be a volunteer to help others. other 4.I would like to help those people whom need help. needs 这些错误的改法都反映了我们的学生英语基础知识比较薄弱，词性辨析、词组记忆、短语积累等方面还要进一步加强。 三、改错复习对策 （1）、考点分类指导， 即从考查角度分类指导学生。如动词错误主要涉及主谓一致、动词时态及语态，非谓语动词的形式以及动词的误用等。 （2）、每天一篇高考改错练习或10个句子的改错训练或10个错误的段落改错。 改错句子和改错段落由模块一到模块五的课本句子和段落改编而来。 例如：M1 Unit4 Earthquake 1. Before the earthquake farmers noticed there were deep cracks on some of the well walls. 2. Mice ran out of the fields looked for some places to hide. 3. People could hear the sound of planes outside city of Tangshan even when there were no planes in the sky. 4. Two-third of the people in Tangshan died or were injured during the earthquake.? 5. 75% of its factories, buildings and 90% of its homes was gone.? …… M2U2 Olympic Games 1. He used to writing about the Olympic Games more than 2,000 years ago. 2. Every fourth years, the Olympic Games are held in the world. 3. We have known that the next Olympic Games are to held in this city. 4. It’s still all about be able to run faster, jump higher and throw further. 5. After Tom joined in the baseball club, he t