江苏省南京市2017届高三调研测试书面表达公开课教学课件(共31张).pptVIP

Just for reference: What touches me most is Anya’s positive attitude as well as her constant effort facing obstacles. (1)________ (现实中), too many people choose to shrink because of fears in their heart and pessimism towards life, (2)______the little girl, (3)______the fact that she is disabled, is brave enough to face up to the biggest obstacle in her life. (4)_____her achievement shows us that when we are in the dark, positive attitude serves as the light to find our correct path and secure a better destination. (5)_________, together with positive attitudes, constant efforts will bring us sure success. In reality while despite And Meanwhile 3) Polish up your writing Try to use some advanced words and varied sentence patterns: ____①________(让我触动最深的是) is Anya’s positive attitude as well as her constant effort ______②__________（当遭遇困难时）. In reality, too many people choose to ____③___(退缩) because of fears in their heart and pessimism towards life, while the little girl, _________④________（倒装句：虽然她残疾了）, is brave enough to ______⑤___(直面) the biggest obstacle in her life. And she shows us that when we are in the dark, __________⑥___________(强调句式：正是积极的态度）serves as the light for us to find our correct path and secure a better destination. _____⑦___________（倒装句：同样重要的是） our constant effort towards our goal with the courage of never giving up, which will ___⑧____(收获) sure success. 让我触动最深的是… What touches/inspires/enlightens me most is.. What impresses / strikes me is… 当遭遇困难时 in front of obstacles when facing/ encountering … faced with/ confronted with obstacles meeting with/ running up against… 退缩 /放弃 shrink back; hold back; withdraw give up; give in; surrender; 虽然她残疾了(inverted sentence) Disabled as she is 直面困难 face up to / face…with courage; face… bravely ,正是积极的态度充当着指引我们正确道路的光(it is…that） , it is positive attitude that serves as the light for us to find our correct path. 同样重要的是 (inverted sentence) Equally important is… 收获成功 yield / help yo