典范英语成果展示二(北京朝阳外语小学).docVIP

成果展示二（北京朝阳外语小学） 学生：王璟 学校：北京朝阳外语小学 学习《典范英语》时间：2009.3 -2010.5 案例说明：王璟自三年级第二学期开始学《典范英语》。经过仿写、扩写、续写、缩写、创编故事的一系列写作训练，她的英语水平得到很大提升。以下是该生在实验第一学期、第二学期、第三学期写的四篇作文。 学习《典范英语》第一学期（仿写 1B L1 What a Bad Day!）： A Day in the Park One day, mum and dad took me to the park. The sky was blue. The sun was warm. We had a skipping race. I won. We had a ball race. Dad won. I saw a little squirrel. It climbed up a tree. I saw another squirrel. It was very cute. It was not afraid of me. We flew kites. My kite was high. We played games. We had a picnic. There were some big ants in the tent. They wanted to eat my food. I gave them some biscuits. They were happy. What a good day! 学习《典范英语》二学期（扩写 2B L26）： The Spaceship One day, Floppy was at the library. Floppy went to sleep and he began to dream. He dreamed about spaceship. A spaceship landed. “Wow!? said Kipper. “A real spaceship!? A white dog looked at Floppy. An alien came out. “I am Zig,? he said. “And this is my dog, Zog.? Floppy looked at Zog. He liked Zog. “Hello Zog!? said Floppy. “Let’s go into space,? said Zig. “Oh yes!? said Kipper. “Oh no!? said Floppy. They went into the spaceship. Kipper was happy. Whoosh! The spaceship took off. It flew up into space. Floppy was afraid. He barked and barked. “What’s that?? said Kipper. “Oh no!? said Zig. “Fireballs!? Floppy looked at the fireballs. Zig was unhappy. Whoosh! Suddenly，there were fireballs all around them. “Help!? said Zog. “What can we do?? said Kipper. ”The fireballs fly fast!? “I don?t know,? said Zig. Crash! A fireball hit them. The spaceship began to spin round. Everyone spin round too. Floppy was afraid again. Zig and Kipper bumped heads. “Oh my head!? said Kipper. “Oh my head!? said Zig. Zig and Kipper?s heads were hurt. Zig felt sick. Floppy saw a very big fireball. It was going to hit them. Zig and Kipper could not see the fireball. Floppy wanted to take off the fireball. “Help!? said Floppy. “We?re in danger!? said Zog. “I don?t know what t