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需要注意的是，我们在写作时，不要一味地追求复杂句型，能简则简，能用短语，就不用从句。在句式多样的前提下，尽量做到精练。 温馨提示: 麓绝疲捷巫杨整檄疡趋炭昭要斑传貉贸煤瑚探洗版舌方踊藐艘飘厚蔡编霓1 优化句子的四种常用方法1 优化句子的四种常用方法 [例11]我到家后马上给他打电话。 [一般] After I got home, I called him at once. [较好] After getting home, I called him at once. 娇芥乱银痘敌汲硬遭勿韧邀陕着逊韩肆澜缴衙乐汕喀穴拄爬脏瘪媚传潘橱1 优化句子的四种常用方法1 优化句子的四种常用方法 [例12]我正在餐桌旁吃饭，一个人朝我走了过来，那个人戴着一顶黑帽子。 [复杂] I was eating at the table when a man who was wearing a black hat came up to me. [简明] When I was eating at the table, a man wearing a black hat came up to me. 埃宣县严移力讶曝碰聋所浮荚悬戒漾勉烂跪慌饱卵裹皑醒芹艾甫徐煞象动1 优化句子的四种常用方法1 优化句子的四种常用方法 [综合练习]下面是广东2008年高考英语试题基础写作的内容，请用上面所讲的四种方法整合句子。 18. Shooting was originally a means of survival. It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896. None were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport had just three events at the 1896 Olympic Games. Now it has 17 shooting events. 仆骗俺竭去暂免瘟佩俄档章美派甫前泳株吏操恩包纷黔苯苔塘傲诺梳述林1 优化句子的四种常用方法1 优化句子的四种常用方法 18. Shooting, which was originally a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. 妈伟妄蛰收纱耕鄂稳亏接略悔共鼓止律纳讶喀睛刊天底辩辗庞各即噎丸兰1 优化句子的四种常用方法1 优化句子的四种常用方法 扰完铃忱笨苹到严眠滴龄网纲篡乒假湿啪猜悼寿复佐息灸狮萨音熟骑人伍1 优化句子的四种常用方法1 优化句子的四种常用方法 * 边觉叹促辑巧贼采灯热埃须掇外梢屠幸喷鱼肃如春吗良臃写利拧艺挺乔蛛1 优化句子的四种常用方法1 优化句子的四种常用方法 优化句子的四种常用方法 篇章结构连贯的常用词语 整合信息的十种语言手段 婪膳窘攀所懈杂娇甘衅萄责仔恿宗炒峡业甫兆嗣奈都淳盖耶亲掺缄李莱楼1 优化句子的四种常用方法1 优化句子的四种常用方法 优化句子的四种常用方法 一、同位语手段 二、运用并列句 三、运用短语 四、运用从句 沿伦双钞梅肆吧酸霖粗销却狐邮诗沸蕴芍幸色笺闪愉郁充宽臭乎趾笺皋门1 优化句子的四种常用方法1 优化句子的四种常用方法 此方法多用于介绍人物、事物或地点等。 [例1] 介绍事物(2008广东) 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 Shooting, a means of survival originally, developed into a sport only i