全新版大学英语1Unit One Growing Up-Text Analysis.ppt

Text Analysis Writing Strategy Unit One Book 1 Writing Strategy Selection of details Repetition Synonymous words phrases ? Sum up the writing strategy Selection of details: 1) What details are selected to show Id been bored with everything associated with English courses? 2) What details are given to show that Mr. Fleagle was dull and rigid? 3) By which sentences does the author manage to give us the impression that his essay was very good? Selection of details: 1) What details are selected to show Id been bored with everything associated with English courses ? * I found English grammar dull and difficult. * I hated the assignments that were agony. Selection of details: 2) What details are given to show that Mr. Fleagle was dull and rigid? * “He was said to be very formal, rigid and hopelessly out of date.” * His “eyeglasses, hairstyle, clothes, jaw, nose, and manner of speaking” were all “prim”. Selection of details: 3) By which sentences does the author manage to give us the impression that his essay was very good? * “He (Mr. Fleagle) was reading my words out loud to the entire class.” * the entire class was listening attentively. * then somebody laughed and then the entire class was laughing… with open-hearted enjoyment. * even Mr. Fleagle stopped two or three times to hold back a small prim smile. Repetition: ?????? 1) How many prim or primly does the author use in para.2? 2) How many I wanted are there in para.5? 3) Whats the use of repetition? Repetition: ?????? 1) How many prim or primly does the author use in para.2? * There are 9 “prim” s or “primly”s in as few as 3 sentences! 3) What’s the use of repetition? * Thus readers will have in their mind a vivid picture of what Mr. Fleagle looked like. Repetition: ?????? 2) How many I wanted are there in para.5? * There are 5 ! 3) Whats the use of repetition? * They help to emphasize Russell Baker’s strong desire to write for himself. Synonymous words phrases: ????? 1) tedious?