高考英语基础写作-人物介绍辅导.ppt

Listen to a dialogue and fill in the blanks with the words you hear. M: Would you please tell me something about Mr. Olympic Bud Greenspan? W: Sure. He is __________Mr. Olympic. He is_________, a famous journalist who ________________________great events of the Olympic Games. He _________edit great events of the Olympic games in 1948. He ____________________both Summer Olympic and the Winter Olympic. M: I was told he also made films. Can you name some of them? W: Yes. He______ some masterpieces巨著 about sports. The first one is______________________. This film is about the weightlifter举重员, John Davis. He won the gold medal in Helsinki芬兰首都赫尔辛基in 1952 Olympic Games. M: Does he have any other works? W: The Olympiad and the Golden Age of Sport. They both cover the Olympic Games. M: What does he believe in? W: He______________________. He ____ “Olympic Games are just like__________. They ______much more than trade and price.” M: Thank you so much for telling me so much about him. W: Sure. He is the famous Mr. Olympic. He is American, a famous journalist who has collected and reported great events of the Olympic Games. He started to edit great events of the Olympic games in 1948. He was very interested in both Summer Olympic and the Winter Olympic. …… W: Yes. He made some masterpieces巨著 about sports. The first one is The Strongest Man in the World. This film is about the weightlifter… W: He believes in the spirit of sport. He said “Olympic Games are just like Christmas. They mean much more than trade and price.” 基础写作系列之　 １、 ２、 ３、 ４、 ５、 人物简介的一般步骤：Give the right order 人物简介的一般步骤：Give the right order 2, appearance ,character 貌 How to correct? 1、是否恰好五句话？ ２、是否每句都含必要信息？ ３、可否自由发挥？ ４、PANTS纠错原则： 1)pattern 2)agreement 一致 3)number 4)tense时态 5)spelling 拼写 基础写作注意事项： 1）能写几句就写几句不留空白 2）主要评分要素包括内容的完整性(completeness)和连贯性(coherence)、句子结构的正确性(Correctness)和复杂性(Variety)。 3）每句占2.5分，每0.5分为一档 4）连贯性共占2.5分 5）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，决不要自我发挥。 6）文不对题给0分，写出相关短语给0.5分。 7）每个句子要含有表中的信息，否则该句