看图初级写作.pptxVIP

情景作文Controlled writing---Narration 初级写作假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，下面四幅图描述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，词数不少于60。Level 1: Decribe the picture and make the sentence complete.whenwhowherewhathow last monday,2. our teacher,3. in our classroom,4. she fell down, 5. her heel was broken.Last Monday, our math teacher s heel was broken in the classroom, and she fell onto the floor. Our monitor stood up and went to carry our teacher on his back, and sent our teacher to the clinic with two classmates. Picture 2whenlater/soonwhoclassmates/monitorwhereclinicwhatrush to the clinichowcarry the teacher on his backPicture 3whenafter schoolwhostudents wherein the hospital/clinicwhatvisit the teacherhowwith flowersAfter school, we went to the hospital with flowers and fruits to see her. Yesterday, our teacher came back on a wheelchair. We clapped our hands as a warm welcome. Picture 4whenyesterdaywhoour teacherwewherein the classroomwhatcame backclappedhowon a wheelchairVersion 1—初级写作 Last Monday, our math teacher s heel was broken in the classroom, and she fell onto the floor. Our monitor stood up and went to carry our teacher on his back, and sent our teacher to the clinic with two classmates. After school, we went to the hospital with flowers and fruits to see her. Yesterday, our teacher came back on a wheelchair. We clapped our hands as a warm welcome. All the sentences are complete, but boring to read because almost every sentence is of the same structure!sb. did sth.Level up!Writing 1.分段；2.连接；3.时态；4.主旨（1）Make the sentence complete;（2）Use more sentence patterns;（3）Using adjectives and adverbs; （4）Expressing emotions and feelings.施润行（13分） Our class had an unforgettable experience with our math teacher. Last Monday, when our math teacher was giving a class, she suddenly lost balance. Her feel was broken in the classroom and she fell down onto the floor. After that, we carried the teacher and ran to the clinic. The next day, we brought some flowers and visited the teacher. Sh