2018届高考英语二轮复习 书面表达针对练（七）道歉信.docVIP

书面表达针对练(七)　道歉信 题目要求 (2016·全国卷Ⅲ) 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示歉意； 2．说明原因； 3．另约时间。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 四步作文法 第一步　审题谋篇 1．体裁　道歉信 2．时态　一般现在时 3．人称　第一人称 第二步　要点要全 1．我们计划这个星期六去书店。 We planned_to_go_to_the_bookstore_this_Saturday. 2．不幸的是，我不能赴约。 Unfortunately, I_cant_make_it. 3．正因为如此，我写信是想表达我真诚的道歉。 Because_of_this,_Im_writing_to_express_my_heartfelt_apology_to_you. 4．我被选出来代表我们学校参加英语辩论比赛，你知道这对我来说是非常重要的。 Im_chosen_to_represent_our_school_to_take_part_in_the_English_debate_competition. It is of_great_importance_to_me. 5．如果我们这个星期天去书店你方便吗？ Would_it_be_convenient_for_you_if_we_go_to_the_bookshop_this_Sunday? 第三步　句式要美 把句4升级为定语从句 Im_chosen_to_represent_our_school_to_take_part_in_the_English_debate_competition,_which,_you_know,_is_of_great_importance_to_me. 第四步　衔接要顺 用unfortunately, however等衔接词串句成文 Dear Bob， How are you doing? We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday. Unfortunately, I cant make it. Because of this, Im writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. How I wish I could go with you! However, Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which, you know, is of great importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having a chance like this to improve my spoken English. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookshop this Sunday? Im looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 改写两用 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。 Dear Bob， Im indeed very sorry that I cant go to the bookstore with you this weekend as planning. Just now, my cousin, which went to Australia for further study last year, informs me he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport. You know, I havent seen each other since he leaves. As a result, I have no choose but to say sorry to you. Please