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Main body扩展手段---举例法 Main body 写 2-3段，先写一个主题句（又称中心句，即topic sentence）, 开门见山指出该段落的核心思想（main idea）, 然后再写3-4个支持句（又称扩展句，即supporting sentence）,通过各种手段来对main idea 进行补充，解释，论述及证明。 论证手段----举例法 One of my friends named Jacky went to a local college and did a lot of voluntary work for the community. (错误) 要用具有说服力的的人群或社会群体来进行举例，比如 high school students, some employees, many educators, most Americans, a group of scientist… 连接词 For example, …(句子) For instance,…(句子) Take …for example. …(句子) e.g. TS Study groups are beneficial to learning. 原创范例 For example, high school students are often organized into small discussion groups to enhance their learning efficiency in the classroom. e.g. TS Many economies have had substantial growth because of their rapid development in international tourism. 原创范例 Take China for example. As more and more foreign tourists are coming to China for both sightseeing and experiencing its traditional culture, there have emerged numerous economic opportunities for local business as well as for the whole country. 3.4 For one thing,…（句子）. For another,…(句子) (两个例子，形影不离) e.g. TS A number of measures should be taken to encourage old people to use such modern technologies. 原创范例 For one thing, manufactures can simplify cell phone applications and create more user-friendly interfaces to help clear up their initial confusion when they are faced with high-tech products. For another, community services that involves high school and college students can focus on teaching senior citizens in the neighborhood how to use the internet to search information and even do shopping. …, such as…n1, n2 and n3 …, including…n1, n2 and n3 …, which may include…n1, n2 and n3 e.g. TS High school should set up P.E class for a number of advantages. 原创范例：By taking part in more physical exercises, students are less likely to develop various diseases, such as obesity, heart attack and the flu. e.g. 居住在大城市的好处（2007年7月考题） TS Living in a big city offers many advantages to modern citizen