四级真题201年12月作文讲评四级真题2012年12月作文讲评.ppt

CET4 2012年12月 Part I Writing Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it .You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Education: A Worthy InvestmentWeekly earnings in 2010($) 三段论 第一段：概述图表反映的主题思想 第二段：分析产生的原因 第三段：展望未来或提出方法或建议 圆形图 pie chart 曲线图 line graph 条形图 bar graph 增加 increase grow rise jump (词性) 减少 decrease drop decline fall reduce (词性) 不变 remain the same 程度 slight small slow gradual steady sharp rapid sudden dramatic marked 图表作文常用的句型 开头 According to the table / pie chart / line graph / bar graph, we can see / conclude that … 根据该表/图，我们可知…… The table / graph reveals (shows / indicates / illustrates / represents / points out) that … 该表/图表明…… As we can see from the table … As can be seen from the line/bar graph… As is shown (illustrated / indicated) in the pie chart … 如表/图所示，…… 描述增减变化 The number of … grew / rose from … to … An increase is shown in …; then came a sharp increase of … In … the number remains the same / drops to … There was a very slight (small/slow/gradual) rise/increase in 2006. There was a very steady (marked/sharp/rapid/sudden/dramatic) drop (decrease/decline/fall/reduction) in 2006 / compared with that of last year. 范文一 Education Pays The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that one with higher education background earns more money weekly than those with lower ones. For instance, the college students with no degree get paid$712 per week whereas those with a Bachelor’s degree can earn $1038. Several reasons, in my opinion, can be identified to account for this phenomenon. To begin with, compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning