美国留学文书写作技巧PPT.pptx

留学文书写作技巧全解问题（一）：特点不清——中国学生总是给美国招生官造成选择困难。团队精神（美国）（Teamwork）VS人多力量大（中国）Earth. Fire. Wind. Water. Heart! Captain Planet supposes that the world is made up of these five elements. We’re familiar with the previously-noted set and with actual elements like hydrogen, oxygen, and carbon, but select and explain another small group of things (say, under five) that you believe compose our world.人多力量大·中国而中国学生写的文书是这样的总结：你可以是怪物，但不能没特点。问题（二）：素材不足——中国学生容易在自身特点的方向上素材薄弱，竞争力不足。素材的数量和质量，就是你在这个方向上的高度。总结：你在你的特点上，算不算一号人物？问题（三）：思想性弱The late?New York Times?photographer Bill Cunningham once said Fashion is the armor to survive the reality of everyday life. I don’t think you could do away with it. It would be like doing away with civilization. Tell us about your “armor.”总结：用思想的高度，撬开名校大门。问题（四）：预示性差总结：好的文书，能把你散落在过去、现在和未来的珠子（个人经历），串连成美丽的项链。问题（五）：方向模糊“其实你在哈佛的本科四年里，我们最担心的就是学生能不能找到他愿意为之付出一生的方向”。——福斯特（哈佛大学校长）Explain your interest in the major you selected and describe how you have recently explored or developed this interest inside and/or outside the classroom. You may also explain how this major relates to your future career goals.?——UIUC 2017-2018年主文书题目“我们在阅读学生文书的时候，最感兴趣的就是他们如何表述他们的学术兴趣与方向”。——约翰·霍普金斯大学招生官Why are you drawn to studying the major you have selected? Please discuss how your interests and related experiences have influenced your choice.-Cornell Admissions Essay问题（六）：写作技巧棒呆文书孵化服务简介文书孵化一条龙服务，解决文书的所有难题：浙江家长 门槛高：越穷的社会越没有思想，富有的社会也要经历三代人，思想被打开。卖书（中美差异）“吐槽留学生录取门槛低，其实隐形门槛高”物质水平能看出来，精神层次上看下，下看上DDRDDR福斯特JHUCornellUIUC