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6.运用with复合结构、分词(短语)等，结构更简明 [高考佳句] ①Our school lies at the foot of a mountain，there is a river flowing in front of it. →At the foot of a mountain lies our school，with a river flowing in front of it.(北京高考满分作文) ②The teacher came into the lecture hall，many students followed him. →The teacher came into the lecture hall，followed by many students.(广东高考满分作文) /soft/ fhfthytjyj ③I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didn’t hear me and rode away. →After picking up the case，I shouted at the man loudly，but he rode too fast to hear me.(湖南高考满分作文) /soft/ fhfthytjyj 7.运用虚拟语气，表达更传神 [高考佳句] ①I missed being hit by the car with your help. →Without your help，I would have been hit by the car. (安徽高考满分作文) ②It is high time for both local government and residents to take effective measures. →It is high time that both local government and residents took effective measures.(福建高考满分作文) /soft/ fhfthytjyj 8.运用复合句，句式更多变 [高考佳句] ①To our surprise，the little girl knows so many things. →What surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.(重庆高考满分作文) ②It was quite an experience for both of us，and I will never forget it for the rest of my life. →It was quite an experience for both of us，which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life.(陕西高考满分作文) /soft/ fhfthytjyj 9.运用it句式，表达更丰富 [高考佳句] ①Personally，drinking plenty of boiled water every day is necessary. →I think it necessary that we should drink plenty of boiled water every day.(陕西高考满分作文) 我认为我们每天喝大量的开水是必要的。 /soft/ fhfthytjyj ②What’s worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think obeying traffic rules is vital. →What’s worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.(2015·江苏，满分作文) 更糟糕的是，一些司机，骑自行车者和行人没有认识到交通规则的重要性。 /soft/ fhfthytjyj ③You should provide some money to fund our program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions.That’s our desire. →It’s our desire that you should provide some money to fund our program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions. (重