Avoiding Run-on Sentences 英语写作 课件.pptVIP

Avoiding Run-on Sentences Avoiding Run-on Sentences Avoiding Run-on Sentences Avoiding Run-on Sentences Avoiding Run-on Sentences Avoiding Run-on Sentences Avoiding Run-on Sentences * * The length of a sentence has nothing to do with whether or not a sentence is considered a run-on. An over-exuberant, run-off-at-the-mouth, 400-word gorilla of a sentence can be structurally fine. A run-on sentence is one in which two clauses have been connected incorrectly. (If you’d like, click on the word “clauses” to review that concept.) Let’s think of an independent clause as an independently operated train headed west . . . getting connected to another train headed east. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night, they are probably wrong. Nothing but grief will result from coupling these train clauses incorrectly! For example. . . . Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night, they are probably wrong. This is an example of the dreaded COMMA SPLICE! A comma splice connects two independent clauses with only a comma. There are several ways to fix a comma splice. . . . 1. We can insert a period and start a new sentence. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night. They are probably wrong. 2. We can insert a comma plus a coordinating conjunction. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night, but they are probably wrong. 3. We can use a semicolon. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night; they are probably wrong. There are three situations in which run-on sentences are apt to happen: 1. When a pronoun in the second clause refers to a noun in the first clause: The President’s popularity has plummeted, she apparently underestimated the opposition. 2. When a suggestion or directive occurs in the second clause: You will be responsible for this material on the final exam, study it thoroughly