2017高考英语写作技巧点拨系列(九).ppt精选.pptVIP

对比: in contrast to; different from; difference between 类似: similar to; as/the same. . . as; 递进: more than; less than 　　第三段: 结尾对全文进行小结, 经常使用的词语及句式有: in a word; in short; generally speaking; It’s clear from the. . . that. . . ; Based on the description above, we can safely draw the conclusion that. . . 　　Ⅱ. 黄金模板 　　As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table (graph / picture/ pie/ chart), 　　　(作文题目的主题)has been on rise/decrease (goes up/increases/drops/　decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/　decreasing from　　　in　　　to　　　in　　　. From the sharp/marked decline/rise in the chart, it goes without saying that　　　(描写趋势). 　　There are at least two good reasons accounting for　　　. (给出原因)On the one hand, 　　　, on the other hand, 　　　is due to the fact that　　　. In addition, 　　　is responsible for　　　. Maybe there are some other reasons to show　　　. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. 　　As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that　　　. /In a word/Generally speaking, 　　　(总结/得出结论). 【审题谋篇】信息全而不漏 【佳句锤炼】词句精而高级 1. 60%的学生从父母或亲友的爱以及从温暖的家庭生活中感 受到幸福。 (一般表达)Sixty percent of the students feel happy. They have the love from their parents and relatives, and also from the warmth of families. (系表结构+并列连词)Sixty percent of the students _________ ____the love from their parents and relatives ________from the warmth of families. feel happy with as well as 2. 20%的学生认为他们很高兴去帮助他人，捐献给需要物品 的人东西或参加义卖活动。 (一般表达)Twenty percent of the students think they are happy to help others, donate something to people who are in need or take part in a voluntary selling. (省略句+宾语从句+介词短语作定语+现在分词作定语)Twenty percent think they ____________help others, donate something to people _______or take part in a voluntary ______. are pleased to in need selling 3. 除了以上这些方面，其他学生也描述了不同方面的幸福。 (一般表达)Besides, the rest of the students talk about their happiness from different aspects. (高级词汇)___________________, the rest of the students