高考写作突破.ppt

书面表达六步法 如何写好高考英语作文得高分？ 1.写好文章的开头和结尾----吸引读者; 2.不让阅卷老师找出毛病----让读者理解; 3.尽量使用较高级的词汇和语言结构----征服读者； 4.重视文章的感染力----感动读者； 5.誊写认真----尊重读者。 近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。 句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档。 1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词, adj等做状语等 ［原文1］We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. ［修正］Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. ［原文2］The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news. ［修正］Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying. ［原文3］Please give me an e-mail when he arrives. ［修正］On his arriving/arrival, please give me an e-mail. 2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、倒装句、虚拟语气等。 ①强调句 ［原文］My parents praised my pet warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. ［修正］My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave my pet who had saved my little sister bravely. ［原文］He didn’t know what happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. ［修正］It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. ②由what等引导的名词性从句，相当于中文的“所……”，有很大的概括力，如: ［原文］We had to stand there to catch the offender. ［修正］What we had to do was standing there, trying to catch the offender. ［原文］To my surprise, many high school students smoke cigarettes. ［修正］What surprises me is that many…… That many high school students smoke cigarettes surprises me. It surprises me that many …… 经典例句： China is no longer what it used to be. ③由with或without引导的短语。 ［原文］She came to China in order to study Chinese. ［修正］She came to China with the purpose of/for learning Chinese. He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. ④分词短语。 ［原文］They sang and laughed as they went back to school. ［修正］ Singing and laughing, they went back to school. ［原文］She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. ［修正］Followed by many students, s