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六种拙劣的PS开头写法点评 六种拙劣的PS开头写法点评。 救世主型： I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solve various problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a vo ice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, The world can be changed by mans endeavor, … He must ever be receptive and sensi tive to the new; and have sufficient courage and skill to novel facts and to deal with them. And I have been longing to be the man to face and solve novel prob lems. 点评：一副救世主的形象，小时候就受富兰克林的影响，立志改变世界。Ps一定要personal，别吹大牛，甚至带着一种霸权思维。 犹抱琵琶型，拖泥带水： Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people .At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action. After carefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career. 点评：重点放在自己要做重大决定上了，人生的转折点，然后来上句所谓名言警句。酝酿太久了。 重复简历型： I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in …. in 2002 at … university, which provided me with a profound background in atmospheric science. During this period, I received Outstanding Student Scholarship for my excellent performance in the academic field. I found that …. is abstruse and interested, and there are so many things I did not understand. Thus I decided to learn more. 点评：Ps不要去repeat简历中的东西。这在很多学校的ps要求中明确提到。 语言幼稚型： Why the gecko can climb on the wall while we cant? Why the leaves turn red in autumn How many stars are there in the sky? When I was in childho od, I always kept asking my mom all kinds of questions。。。I am especially interested in how things work, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle. So most of the things in my family has been ta