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社会热点之食品安全 Directions: Write an essay of at least 150 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1)describe the drawing briefly，2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments． 三聚氰胺：melamine 范文 A vivid picture jumps into my sight when I take a hard look at this paper .As is depicted in the drawing the toxic chemical melamine is being injected directly into a cow and a hen. There is little doubt that the milk produced by the cow and the eggs laid by the hen will enter the market and damage the health of the people eventually． Digging into this picture, we can find the cartoonist is highlighting a widespread trend on China’s mainland. Thanks to economic advancement brought by the reform and opening up policy, average Chinese citizens are enjoying improved living standards unimaginable decades ago. Food security, however, remains a pressing headache to be addressed. The prevalence of food insecurity has evolved to an extremely alarming extent which deserves urgent attention. Put in another way, the problem of food insecurity is worsening． Personally, a couple of driving forces are behind the problem. Topping the list is the lack of laws and regulations to crack down on those unlawful business people. All parties involved should do their utmost to curb the disturbing trend．I firmly believe that the current situation would be bettered in the foreseeable future if we drive long-term combined endeavors． 译文 当我仔细审视考卷的时候，一幅生动的图画映入我的眼帘，，正如图画所示，有毒的化学物品三聚氰胺正在被直接注入一头牛和一只母鸡的体内。，毋庸置疑，这种牛产的牛奶和这种鸡下的蛋将直接进入市场并将最终危害到人们的健康。 深挖这幅图画，我们能够发现：卡通画的作者正在强调一种在中国非常普遍的现象。由于改革开放政策带来的经济发展，普通的中国人正在享有提高了的生活质量，这是在几十年前难以想象的。然而，食品安全问题仍然是需要迫切解决的问题。食品不安全现象已经发展到令人警觉的程度，并值得我们高度关注。换句话说，食品不安全问题正在恶化。 在我看来，问题的背后有几个原因。最重要的原因是缺少法律法规来打击这些不法商家。所有相关部门应该尽最大努力来打击这种令人不安的现象。我坚信，如果我们付出长期共同的努力，在可预见的未来，这种状况将会有所改善。 闪光点剖析 (1)A vivid picture jumps into my sight when I take a hard look at this paper. 当我仔细审视考卷的时候，一幅生动的图画映入我的眼帘。 闪光点1：仔细体会 jump 的用法，非常形象。 闪光