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while we may be able to sustain the illusion of control through the conscious mind alone, in reality we are continually faced with a question: “Why cannot I make myself do this or achieve that? 主干识别：we are continually faced with a question 其他成分：while we may be able to sustain the illusion of control through the conscious mind alone ????????? 让步状语从句 ????????? ?“Why cannot I make myself do this or achieve that? ?????????? a question的同位语从句 ?????????? in reality 状语 翻译点拨：词汇点拨： ????????? While 虽然 Sustain 维持 ????????? Illusion 幻觉 ????????? Conscious 有意识的 ????????? Continually 一直 ????????? 成分点拨： ????????? 先翻让步状语从句： ????????? while we may be able to sustain the illusion of control through the conscious mind alone, ????????? 虽然我们可能仅通过有意识的思维就能维持控制的幻觉， ????????? （Conscious mind 可以直接翻译为 “意识”，conscious的修饰在中文中是多余的） ????????? 再翻状语和主句： ???????? ?但事实上，我们却要一直面临一个问题：我们为什么不能让自己去做这件事情或去实现那个目标呢？ 参考译文：虽然我们可能只需要通过意识就能维持控制的幻觉，但事实上，我们却要一直面临一个问题：我们为什么不能让自己去做这件事情或去实现那个目标呢？ Time was when biologists somewhat over worded the evidence that these creatures preserve the health of game by killing the physically weak, or that they prey only on worthless species. 主干识别：Time was when…主系表结构 其他成分：biologists somewhat over worded the evidence 表语从句 that these creatures preserve the health of game by killing the physically weak, evidence的同位语从句之一 or that they prey only on worthless species. evidence的同位语从句之二 翻译点拨：词汇点拨： ????????? Game 猎物 ????????? Preserve保持 the physically weak 体弱者 ????????? prey 猎杀 ? ????????somewhat或多或少 ????????? over worded 过多的提及（滥用） ????????? 成分的点拨： ????????? Time was when= there was time when… ????? ????曾经有段时间， 同位语从句的处理： ????????? ： 或者 “即，”“也就是说…” ????????? 成分的处理： ????????? biologists somewhat over worded the evidence 生物学家或多或少滥用了一种证据， that these creatures preserve the health of game by killing the physically weak, 即这些生物通过杀死体弱者来保持种群的健康， or that they prey only on worthless species. 或者说它们仅仅捕食没有价值的物种。 参考译文：曾经有段时间，生物学家或多或少滥用了一种证据，即这些生物通过杀死体弱者来保持种群的健康，或者说它们仅仅仅捕食没有价值的物种。 In fact, it is difficult to