书信类应用文2006年真题.pptVIP

书信类应用文2006年考研英语小作文真题 真题讲解 开头： Dear Sir or Madam, 写给机构的信件都要以这个开头，无法判断男女。 第一段：写作目的（改写提纲1） Moved by the noble cause of the Project Hope and encouraged by the what has been achieved so far, I would like to contribute my bit to the project by offering financial aid to a child in the remote area of your province, 前半句：写作目的：捐款原因Moved by noble cause of Project Hope and encouraged by what has been achieved so far 俩个原因：@被希望工程这项伟大的事业所感动@被鼓舞 1. move表示运动，moved表示感动，动词加ed是动词的过去分词。过去分词短语做状语：被感动。 2.noble高尚的，noble man 贵族 3.cause事业，原因=reason 4.courage勇气 encourage鼓舞，鼓励 En是动词前缀，放在名词前面使名词动词化 encouraged 过去分词作状语 5逗号前是俩个并列的过去分词短语作状语的句子 6,by后加宾语，被……鼓励（by是介词） What引导的一个宾语从句，介词后加宾语从句（句子的亮点）除了动词后可加宾语从句外介词的后边也可加。 Has been achieved现在完成时的被动语态 So far 迄今为止 后半句：I would like to contribute my bit to the project by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area of your province. I would like to 想要比want的语气更加委婉。提纲中用的want，作文中要用同意替换。 Bit 微薄之力，一点儿（满分词汇，没人用又地道的词汇） 添加的内容：your province 也可以换成专有名词：eg ：Sichuang Province 新疆省：Xinjiang Province 2010年的新疆省雪灾：雪灾：snow storm；贵州省 drought 旱灾 第二段：改写提纲2 具体说明帮助那类孩子 I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a girl who just stared schooling but whose family cannot afford her education . My plan is to pay for her tuition on an annual basis till her finishes her secondary education. I would like to remit my donation to a bank account opened by her family in her local area. I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a girl who has just started schooling but whose family cannot afford her education. 万能句型：I would be much grateful if you could…如果您能做某事我将非常感谢。Would 比will的语气委婉，be grateful 感激，could要比can语气委婉 Seek out 找到，替换提纲中的found A girl 替换提纲中的a child Girl后加了俩个并列的的定语从句 入学：start schooling 完成学业：finish school Has start 现在完成时。时态的变化 But引导俩个并列的定语从句 上的起学：afford （support）one‘s education 赡养：financially support 细节： 这句话是改写提纲2，具体说明你想帮助哪类孩子。 作者写了三点：第一点，小女孩；第二点，刚刚入学；第三点，家里贫穷上不起学 改写提纲3：如何执行计划：（作者写了俩点）My plan is to pay for her tuition on an annual basis till she fin