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作文评估要求 Content The main point is clear and sharply focused. 论点清晰，紧扣主题 The paper as a whole develops your thesis statement.（中心论点） The thesis expresses a definite and significant viewpoint.（论点明确，并有鲜明的意义） Irrelevant details are removed.（没有不相关的细节） All the statements are accurate and fully supported with facts. （观点的正确性，事实论据充分证明论点） The subject is sufficiently limited for disscussion in a short essay. （题目具体化，题目适用短文写作） The message is informative. （信息量大） The material is useful. （选材有效） The approach is original.（写作方法独特） The discussion delivers on the promise made in the thesis statement.（假定的观点得到充分论证） all the assertions are backed up by solid support.（所有论断都得到有效的支撑） It has answered all anticipated readers’ questions. （能够回答读者所期望回答的问题） Reasoning is sound and there are no gaps in logic.（逻辑合理，没有逻辑跳跃或不符的现象） Organization 1. The essay has a distinct and connected three-part structure: Introduction, Body, and Conclusion.（明显的三段式） a. The introduction sets the scene, sparks interest, creates suspense, provides background, or otherwise leads logically and entertainingly into the main point of the paper.（开头部分能设定场景，引起读者兴趣，制造一定的悬念，或交代背景，换句话说，能有逻辑并轻松愉悦的方式进入文章主体部分）。 b. The body is developed to make the point. （主体部分合理发展，并阐明观点） c. The conclusion creates a sense of completion. （结论部分帮助文章获得一定的完整性） 2. Supporting paragraphs are well structured and developed. a. The body paragraphs are in an order (such as chronological order, spatial order, casual order, climatic order or general-to-specific order) that shows a clear line of thought and emphasizes the thesis. （正文部分有清晰的逻辑顺序：时间顺序，空间顺序，原因结果顺序，或低潮到高潮顺序，一般到个别） b. There are clear transitions between sections. （非常清晰的衔接手段） c. The paper is well-proportioned.（文章比例安排得很好） d. The paragraph divisions are logical.（段落划分符合逻辑） e. Emphasis is placed on the right points. （强调的部分合理） f. Each paragraph is unified and coherent in that it sticks its main point and flows smoothly from sentence to sentence. （每段主题统一，连贯） Language 1. Grammar is standard throughout. （语法标准） a. Idiom