2013届高考英语第一轮课时复习课件17参考.ppt

晨读在线　 假如你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up: TV，cell，or web？”为题，写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： 1．电视、手机和网络的普及； 2．自己的选择； 3．陈述理由。 注意：1.词数不少于120； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【范文欣赏】 　请进行完形填空(每空一词) Which would you give up: TV，cell，or web? We are now living in an information age，in which TV，cells and the Web are widely used.1.It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves 2.without them. 3．However，if I had to give up one of them，I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet.I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and 4.there are too many commercials.Besides，most programs on TV are also available elsewhere. More and more teenagers spend twice as much time in front of the TV 5.as playing outside，which is harmful to their health. As 6.for cells and the Web，they are more necessary to me.I need 7.a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family,8.and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet. (139 words) 【名师点评】 本文要点全面，说理透彻，逻辑严密，自由发挥充分得体，有着较强的说服力和感染力。写作所采用的句式结构合理且多样，现将其写作上的亮点陈述如下 ： 1. 句型结构亮点。 (1)定语从句的运用。如：We are now living in an information age，in which TV，cells and the Web are widely used. (2)名词性从句的运用。如：It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them. (3)状语从句的运用。如：I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy，and therere too many commercials. (4)虚拟语气的合理运用。如：However，if I had to give up one of them，I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. 2．高级词汇的使用，如：available 等。 3．布局谋篇亮点。第一段总起，第二段表明在电视﹑手机和网络中，宁愿放弃“电视”的理由，第三段说明“手机”和“网络”对我的意义。全文层次脉络清晰﹑布局合理。 【疯狂背诵】 请用10分钟背诵范文 【还原范文】 请将下列句子翻译成英语 1．电视、手机和网络，你愿意放弃哪一个？(题目) Which would you give up: TV，cell，or web? 2．我们现在正生活在一个信息时代，电视、手机和网络广泛使用。 We are now living in an information age，in which TV，cells and the Web are widely used. 3．似乎许多人没有了它们开心不起来。 It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them. 4．然而，如果我不得不放弃它们中之一，我将会关掉电视而不是关掉手机或者断开网络。 However，if I had to give up one of them，I would tu