(精选)商务英语翻译第五章 产品说明书的翻译课件.pptVIP

5.2.2.5套译 套译指的是使译文符合目标语的表达。它涵盖多种翻译技巧，如词类与句子成分转换、词序倒装、语态变换等，套译的功能是为了使译文在忠实原文的基础上实现可读性。 例13 原文： Ampoules Octreotide Acetate, equivalent to octreotide (as free peptide): 0.05, 0.1or 0.5 mg. 译文： 1次用量针剂的醋酸奥曲肽可能含0.05，0.1或0.5毫克的奥曲肽（游离状态）。 例14 原文： Avon Roll on Anti-Perspirant Deodorant: All-day deodorant and wetness protection. Keepunder-arms dry and odor-free. Glides on smoothly. Dries quickly. Non-stinging. Non-sticky. Won’t stain clothing. 译文： 雅芳止汗香体露：特别温和配方，适合各类肤质，独特的清香，令身体全天保持干爽清新。 例15 原文： Ladra Swimming Wear, Cholorine and mould resistance, superb fit wet or dry, lasting shape retention, comfort. 译文： 莱德拉泳衣，有效抵抗氯化水及防霉，干湿环境皆可使用，可体合身，形状保持不变，舒适自然。 例16 原文： 尊品咖啡：本产品历史悠久，系精选优质云南小粒咖啡豆，采用先进工艺精制而成，浓郁香醇，口齿留香，有神怡之觉，是味中极品。 译文： This product has a long and rich historical standing. It is made from selected coffee beans and uses special and elaborate technique… 例17 原文： 采自云南高山云雾之中，清明前精心采制。 译文： High-quality tea is prepared with the leaves picked from Yunnan alps at the right time in April. 5.2.2.6分译与合译 分译与合译是两种相关的翻译方法，分译指的是将一个又长又复杂的句子拆分成简短的句子，其通常用于英译汉中，而合译法则反之。 例18 原文： Walch Body Wash contains cleansing extract from plants which is 100% natural to strengthen your skin while cleansing. Contains pure botanicals to cleanse your body gently; while classic fragrance to make you charming and fascinating. 译文：威露士沐浴露含植物洁净素，天然不刺激，令肌肤卫生更健康。蕴含美丽香熏成分，舒缓压力，令你时刻保持精神焕发，魅力过人。 例18 原文： 精选国际酿酒名种葡萄赤霞珠为原料，严格依照国际葡萄酒AOC标准，采用法国陈酿酒专用酵母橡皮桶发酵，陈酿八年精制而成。该葡萄酒色泽棕红，酒体澄清，果香、酒香沉馥优雅，橡木香细腻，酒体丰满，具干红葡萄酒独特风味。 例18 译文： This five star dry red wine is made from the famous Cabernet Sauvignon variety. It is aged in oak barrels beyond 8 years, in compliance with international AOC standards. This brown-colored wine has developed a very distinctive bouquet as a result of many years of aging. It is a full bodied wet structured wine of great character and elegance with a rich, long smooth finish. 5.3 翻译实训 一、将下列句子译为汉语或英语，注意运用产品说明书翻译技巧。 This lipstick gives true sophisticated color that stays