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Lesson1主题：小作文思路导图主讲人：TINA以2011年为例:cousin Liming 考上大学第一步：定位-----恭喜信第二步：归纳要求----1.恭喜 2. 建议和指导第三步：模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-----恭喜 2.打拳---------------------夸复旦，为你骄傲 3.肥肉（2个万能句）--建议指导：好好学习 4.结束语------------------祝福前程似锦Dear Li Ming,I am happy to hear that you will go to Fu Dan University. As we all know, Fu Dan University enjoys great reputation and popularity all over the world, so we are proud that you become a part of it. It is believed that one’s success depends [in large measure] on his hard work and dedication. So I do suggest that your top priority should be given to learn useful and helpful knowledge in college, which makes it easier for you to become an excellent candidate after graduation. I hold an expectation that you will have a bright future.=you will have a great prospect. Yours sincerely, Zhangwei知识点：五点一．五种头：It is believed/said/hoped/known/assumed/acknowledged that ____________________2.众所周知 As we all know, ___________/As is known to all, 3.我认为： We/ I come to realize/believe/that ____________ I am firmly convinced that__________________________ As far as I am concerned, ___________________________ In the eyes of most people, __________________________ I strongly feel/do suggest that___________________ I have reasons to believe that__________________4. I am happy to learn/hear that_______________________I am sorry to say/tell that ____________________5.Everyone (in business/in the world) has been told that ________________二．换词思维：1.换头：会的人：I am writing this letter to you to congratulate you on the successful admission to Fudan University 不会的人：I am so happy to learn that you will go to Fudan University2.换词：e.g录取：会的人：you have been admitted by/gained admission to/enrolled by Fudan University不会的人: you will go to Fudan University三．变长句的诀窍：3个字变成30个字长句=头+身体+尾巴+垃圾以复旦很有名为例：Fudan University is popular 如何变长句头: As is known to all, ___________________________________ 身体：Fu Dan Uni