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看图作文的写作 Write an English composition in over 120 words on the picture and instructions given (2002上海高考题) 看图写作要素 1. 认真审图，抓住寓意立论，列出要点 看图作文的关键，在于看懂图画内容，理解画面意思，准确理解作者通过画面所传达的信息，展开议论。 2. 首段要直截了当，开门见山 开门见山就是文章写什么，开头就说什么，直截了当，尽快入题，不要拐弯抹角，拖泥带水 3.既有对图片的描述，又点出作者要表达的主题 On a Sunday morning, Jane, a little girl, is learning to ride a bike. However, her parents and grandmother are following her to help her. What’s more ridiculous, her mother even carries some medicine with her. We can see that the girl doesn’t know how to ride the bike with their help. (Description of the story) As a matter of fact, this is not a picture for fun. It tells us that parents are not supposed to help their children in every aspect. On the contrary, they should let them be more independent. (State out the topic) Such kind of phenomenon exists in numerous families. Parents consider that they should get everything ready for children in order that children can devote more time and energies to studies. In this way, children have no time to be independent. We can imagine what will happen to them after they leave school. In recent years, it is often reported that even some college students don’t know how to wash clothes. (围绕主题,结合实际展开议论) Therefore, we can safely conclude that there should be proper love and attention needed in the growth of a child but it should never be too much, or children will be spoilt and they will end up in accomplishing nothing all through their life. The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century. 238’ A girl was learning to ride a bicycle. Her parents and her grandmother were helping her. Her parents were too nervous to teach the girl and they were only worried about not to make the girl injured. In that case, how could the girl learn riding a bike well? In real life, there are many examples like this. The parents love their child too much so that the chil