《Unit9　Review 课件》高中英语人教版选修英语写作59125.ppt

Writing Skills 第五档25-30分 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 所有内容与提示吻合。 应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇应用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达；具备较强的语言运用能力。 恰当使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 常用过渡词举例 * Xiaogan Senior Middle School Lv Xiaomei Applying grammar structures 湖北省高考英语作文评分标准 Choosing better words Making proper use of transitional words Choosing better words 1.晚学词优先原则 选词 extraordinary good excellent perfect terrific fantastic marvelous nice great Martin didn’t have enough _____________ evidence to prove the man guilty. What I have experienced in the past three years can fully show_________ this point. adequate illustrate 2.短语句型优先原则 like sth be fond of sth As the College Entrance Examination is coming_____________ ,we must work harder. drawing near You should do sth If I were you, I would do sth It is beneficial for you to do sth make use of sth use sth 3.具体词优先原则 walked / ran / rushed / dashed The moment the bell rang, we went out of the classroom. Tom said he loved the movie Fast Furious 7 . whispered / added / commented From this story, I think (phrase) that bad words have bad influence on us. If we understand (phrase) this well ,I believe that we can get along well with ourselves. Sometimes, bad words can hurt people. I learned this from my experience. One day, I was playing volleyball with my classmates in my PE class, but I missed several chances . My friend Peter called me “fool”. I was surprised . I felt bad (specific) and I thought (phrase) that our friendship ended (phrase). My classmates comforted and persuaded me . Peter apologized to me. I realized he had a sense of teamwork .Soon (sentence pattern) I forgave him and we were friends again. Task1 :Replace the underlined words according to the hints. From this story, I think that bad words have bad influence on us. If we understand this well ,I believe that we can get along well with ourselves. Sometimes, bad words can hurt people. I learned this from my experience. One day, I was playing volleyball w