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做英作文的要点 1、做到7个避免： 1）～低级的语法错误。 2）～拼写错误。 3）～用词不当。（没有把握时要勤查词典） 4）～写大话、空话。要有具体内容，即实质性的 东西。 5）～多次重复使用相同的词汇或句式。 6）～用写好的中文作文硬译成英语。 7）～随意使用逗号。 2、作文要有闪光点，具体表现在： 1）文章通顺，意思连贯，思维清晰。前一句为后一句作 好铺垫。连接词使用恰到好处。 2）尽量使用书面语，如：分词结构、复合句（宾、定、状、同位语、主语、表语从句等）、虚拟语气、倒装结构、被动语态、It is 句式等。 3）句子结构尽可能多变，不能死板、单调。 4）尽可能多地使用词组、习惯用语或表达法、俗语和谚语。 5）段落之间要有机地联系起来，各段落既能自成体系，又能与其它段落相互关联，相得益彰。好的作文一般都能前后呼应，主题明确。 在百分制的考卷中，作文一般占15％。优秀为13～15分；良好为10～12分；合格为9分；9分以下为不合格。 具体例子： 1、做到5个避免： 1）～低级的语法错误 e.g. There are many student are playing basketball in the playground. 修改：(1) There are many students playing basketball on the playground. (2) Many students are playing basketball on the playground. 2）～拼写错误 e.g. Enviromental problem is very serious especially in big cities. (Environmental) 3）～用词不当。（没有把握时要勤查词典） e.g. Friendship is a permanent issue of our life. (theme) 4）～写大话、空话。要有具体内容，即实质性的东西。 e.g. So everybody should have friendship. It likes a light for you. It will tell you where to go. 修改：So friendship is necessary to everyone. Without it we will surely feel lonely and helpless. 5）～多次重复使用相同的词汇或句式 e.g. What does friendship mean? It means two people’s relation. It is a bridge of two people. It is believing of two people. You must believe so that they can help you. 修改 Friendship means a relationship between friends, or the feeling or relationship that friends have, or the state of being friends. It serves as a bridge between／among people. Only if people trust each other can they have real friendship. 6）～用写好的中文作文硬译成英语。 友谊是人生的一部分，不仅因为我们需要其他人，而且也因为有许多人需要我们。 原句：It’s a part of life. Not only because we need others, but also for the reason that there are many people need us as well. 修改 Friendship is a part of our life. Not only do we need others from time to time, but we are needed by others as well. 7）～随意使用逗号。 e.g. Friendship is a cup of tea, it can make you feel comfortable when you are tired. 修改 Friendship is a cup of tea, which can make you feel comfort