优化课堂高二英语课件：unit1 periodⅳ writing （新人教版必修5）.pptVIP

Period Ⅳ Writing 原句1 John Snow was a famous doctor in London—so expert, indeed ( 插 入 语 ), that he attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician.(教材 P2)约翰·斯诺是伦敦一位著名的医生——他的 确医术精湛，因而成了维多利亚女王的私人大夫。 点评 这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成： ①John Snow was a famous doctor in London. ②He was expert. ③He attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician. 合并之第一步：由于句②和句③之间有“如此……以至 于……”的逻辑关系，可以用“so...that...”将其合并：He was so expert that he attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician. 合并之第二步：省去第②句的 he was，改用破折号引出后 面的内容，再在其后加入插入语。 仿写 ①张老师是个热心的老师。他那么善良，我想，当他的学 生遇到麻烦时他一定乐意帮助他们。 (提示：热心的 warm-hearted) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ②李平是我们班一位用功的学生。他那么勤奋，我想不到 晚上 11 点他不会上床睡觉的。 ( 提示：用功的，勤奋的 hard-working/diligent; 直到…… 才…… not...till/until...) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ Mr.Zhang is a warm-hearted teacher—so kind, I think/I believe/ I suppose, that he is sure to help his students when they are in trouble. Li Ping is a hard-working boy in my class—so diligent, I suppose, that he never goes to bed until 11 at night. 原句2 Although he had tried to ignore them, all his mathematical calculations led to the same conclusion：that the earth was not the centre of the solar system.(教材 P7)虽然他曾经试着不去理睬那 些数字，然而他所有的数学计算都得出了一个相同的结论：地 球不是太阳系的中心。 点评 这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成： ①He had tried to ignore them. ②All his mathematical calculations led to the same conclusion. ③The earth was not the centre of the solar system. 合并之第一步：句①和句②之间有“尽管……但是……” 的逻辑关系，我们可以用 although 将其合并。 合并之第二步：句③是解释说明 conclusion 的具体内容， 可以用冒号加 that 从句充当同位语从句。 仿写 ①虽然她不相信别人说的话，可她所收集的证据得出的结 论是：她的实验结果是错误的。 (提示：收集证据 collect evidence(s)) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ Though she didnt believe what other people said, the evidences that she collected