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2009-2010-2第三次作文评讲 Topic One: My hometown is very much like my college town； Sample: ①My hometown is very mcuh like my college town./ ②There are many similarities between my hometown and college town. （）It’s located in rural area and surrounded by farmland, so the air is very fresh there. Similarly, my college town is small too. It lies in the center of framland and there are many trees in my college town. When I walk in the schoolyard, I feel cool even in summer.（）①In this way, I can say that my college town makes me feel at home./ ②Therefore/so, living in my college town makes me feel at home. （） (09) Topic Two: Friendship and love. Sample One: Friendship and love are both important in our life. （）It always makes us happy when we study, play and chat with them. When we feel sad and want to tell someone what happened, they always listen carefully, comfort us and try their best to make us happy. Similarly, love can drive loneliness away and bring happiness. We can share our happiness and sorrow with our lovers. They always accompany us whether in happiness or in trouble. They are devoted to us and willing to do anything for us. （）OSo we should value friendship as well as love. （）Sample Two: As we all know that friendship is similar to love very much. （）FWhen meeting difficulties, they face up to and solve them together. Moreover, they have many same interests and share happiness and sadness with each other. Similarly, two people who fall in love with each other, care about each other, too. First, they often talk about their dreams and solve the problems together. Second, they have many same opinions and understand the feelings of each other. （）Ibetween them. （）Sample Three: Forming freidship and love needs the same factors. （）WFriends should have the same beliefs, share the same values, and care more about each other. Friends also should be honest, loyal and warm-hearted. Similarly, our boyfriend or girlfrind should be loyal, honest and warm-hearted too. Having