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ISSUE130 How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society. 提纲： 论点：agree disagree. 正：socializing children is essential and indispensable for the children’s development. 反: Socialization is neither the only nor the most important factor influencing the growth of children. How children socialized is neither the only nor the most important factor contributes to the destiny of society. 2. We have raised our children well socialized, for society advances and thrives in the race to achievement of a better society. 红笔为改动后的部分 Does how children are socialized determine the future of society and nowadays we fail to bring up children who can help bring about a better society, as the statement suggests? Undoubtedly, the children nowadays are not well socialized will exert an disagreeable influence on the destiny of society. However, I substantially disagree with statement for the reason that it exaggerates the importance of children who are socialized and ignore the surroundings, which can also have a significance of the future of society. To begin with, there is no denying the fact that socializing children is essential and indispensable for the children’s development. To demonstrate the importance of socializing children, it is crucial to give a definition to socialization. As far as I am concerned, socialization means providing basic knowledge and skills to help people adapt the society, such as the communication skills, cooperation consciousness and awareness of accountability etc. Apparently, all factors that socialization embraces are part and parcel of children’s growth and development. Considering that children stand for the future, in order to establish a sustainable and flourish society, we should educate children to be socialized. For supporting example, by being acquired to apologize when make mistakes, children learn the true meaning of oblig