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（6）、不间断句子 什么叫不间断句子?请看下面的例句。例如：There were many students attended this sports meeting. 剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思： “There are many students.”以及 “Students attended this sports meeting”。 简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。改为：Many students attended this sports meeting. 或：There were many students who attended this sports meeting. 作文中常见错误分析 （7）、措词不当措辞是如何适当地选用词语的问题。如果平时不注意词汇的积累，在写作中又没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯，随心所欲，拿来就用那么是很容易犯此类错误的。例如：She is a slim girl with long, gold hair.剖析：显然 “gold”一词用错了，“gold”解释 为“金质的”，而此处是想要表达“金色 的”。改为：She is a slim girl with long, golden hair. 作文中常见错误分析 （8）、标点符号误用?英文的标点符号与中文的标点符号还是有一点细微差别。标点符号的误用，这也多少给作品的整体美感带来了些负面影响。 以下罗列几种常见的标点符号错误： 例1：I?love?novels、sports、?music、movies? and? so? on. （ⅹ） 改为： I?love?novels，sports，?music，movies? and? so? on. ? 例2：I‘m? a? middle? school? student。（ⅹ）? 改为： I‘m? a? middle? school? student .? 例3：We brought many kinds of foods, such as hamburgers, sausages, egg rolls……??（ⅹ）???? 改为?：We brought many kinds of foods, such as hamburgers, sausages, egg rolls… 作文中常见错误分析 例4?：Recently, I have just finished reading a book named《 Harry Potter and the Half-blooded Prince》. （ⅹ） 改为?： “Harry Potter and the Half-blooded Prince” 例5：My allowance is 100 yuan a month, I spend 20 percent on transportation, another 40 percent is spent on mobile phone cards, I save the rest in a bank account, because I want to use it for urgent need. （ⅹ）没有句断! 改为?： My allowance is 100 yuan a month. I spend 20 percent on transportation. Another 40 percent is spent on mobile phone cards . I save the rest in a bank account, because I want to use it for urgent need. 作文中常见错误分析 善于收集写作素材 ●通过大众媒体捕捉、收集有价值的信息。 ●积累学习生活的经历和体验。 ●关注社会热点，了解新闻人物，积累生活中让人激动的事件。 温馨提示: 5、反问式的结尾 虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，并具有特别的强调作用，引起读者深思。 e.g. “S