英语四六级如何写好作文.pptVIP

如何写好英语作文 1．简洁性（Conciseness） 1.1 尽可能把从句变成短语，把短语变成单词。如： When I pushed the door open, I saw a group of young people. Pushing the door open, I saw a group of young people. 1.2 避免不必要的重复，包括语义重复和同词重复。 She is attractive in appearance, but she is a rather foolish person. She is attractive, but rather foolish. 2. 多样性（Variety） 2.1 句式变化的多样性 通过句子变换（transformation of sentence）, 运用不同结构，选用不同句式来表达相同的内容，使表意手段更为多样化。 2.1.1 既可以用主动式也可以用被动式，如： We certainly should make great efforts. Great efforts are certainly required. 2.1.2既可以用肯定式也可以用否定式，如： The lesson will be firmly rooted in our minds. We will never forget this lesson. 2.1.3既可以是正常语序也可以是倒装语序，如： One can’t learn anything until he rids himself of complacency（自满）. Only when one rids himself of complacency can he learn something. 2.1.4 某些成分既可以放在句子前面也可以放在句子后面，还可以放在中间，如： With a car, people can get around freely. People can get around freely with a car. People, with a car, can get around freely. 3．统一性（Unity） 一个句子不论长短，所表达的只能有一个中心明确且意思相对完整的内容。由于英语句子重形合，句法结构要完整，即一个句子必须有主语、谓语和其他必要的辅助成分，必须避免句子残缺不全。 如： 3.1 The police helped him when his important documents were lost and he found them several days later. 句子的统一性原则要求句子只有一个明确的中心。此句有两个中心the police 和he , 最好改为： He lost his important documents, but found them with the help of the police several days later. 3.2 For example, the increase in the cost of renting a house. 此句只有名词短语而无谓语动词，结构不完整，不能作为一个独立的句子来看待。应改为： For example, the cost of renting a house has increased. 4. 连贯性（Coherence） 4.1 Her voice was clear, deep and with resonance（洪亮）. Her voice was clear, deep and resonant（洪亮的）. 并列结构必须是同类的结构并列。原句违反这一原则，破坏了句子成分的和谐和句式的优美对称 4.2 My mother is a musician; therefore I have also chosen it as my profession. My mother is a musician; therefore I have also chosen music as my profession. 代词起连接语篇的作用，它能体现句子之间的逻辑联系，上面句中it 指代不明，模棱两可。 4.3 After eating our lunch, the driver called us to the bus. After eating our lunch, we were called to the bus by the driver. 此句非谓语动词的逻辑主语与主语不一致。这显然不是作者的原意，改正后