四级作文润色指南.docVIP

一、基本表达 ：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that ：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 万能理由（Omnipotence） 1. 方便：convenient/ convenience 2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 3. 节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift/waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish 4. 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance; selfish, isolated, conservative 5. 人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic 6.娱乐:colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax, tired, boring, lonely 7. 环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8. 安全和危险：safe, danger, risk 9. 经验：experience, social experience, enter the society 10. 人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely 四六级作文翻译练习 绿化我们的城市 近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。 普通版 Recently, with the development of businesses and industries, more and more trees have disappeared in big cities. We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees. But, it is important to realize to make our cities green. 润色版 In contemporary society, while our industries and businesses have experienced a(n) rapid/ fast/ amazing/ marked/ fantastic development, the number of trees in many large cities has declined/ decreased/ reduced sharply/ dramatically. Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance. 注：industry 和 industrial 绿化我们的城市（续） ： 绿化城市会带来很多好处。其一，绿化城市能够净化空气。科学研究已经证明树木通过吸收作用可以降低大气中碳化合物的含量。其二，它能够美化城市。到处是花草树木，我们会欣然地感到自己置身于美丽的花园中。最后，绿化城市能够带来大量木材，这是解决自然资源短缺的有效办法。 普通版 There are many advantages in making cities greener. First, it makes our air clean. Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption. Second, it adds to the beauty of our cities. With trees and flowers everywhere, there is a pleasant feeling that we live in a beaut