英语写作教学（文章修改与修订），漂亮.pptVIP

Revising Editing Writing makes an exact man. Writing a first draft 2 Prewriting 1 Editing 4 Revising 3 Prewriting Techniques Freewriting Questioning Making a List Diagramming Preparing a Scratch Outline Revising means rewriting a paper, building on what has already been done, in order to make it stronger. “It’s like cleaning house – getting rid of all the junk and putting things in the right order.” Revising a rough draft 3 or 4 times is often at the of the writing process. Revision Steps Set your draft aside for a while. Work from typed or printed text. Read your draft aloud. Add your thoughts and changes above the lines or in the margins of your paper. Revising content Revising sentences Editing 3 In the narrow sense, 2 stages In the broad sense Unity Support Organization Must have support... Unity Unified Do I have an interesting introduction, a solid conclusion, and an accurate title? Do I have a clear method of organizing my paper? Do I use transitions and other connecting words? Supported Organized Are there three separate supporting points for the thesis? Do I have specific evidence for each of the three supporting points? Is there plenty of specific evidence for each supporting point? Do I have a thesis that is clearly stated or implied in the introductory paragraph of my essay? Do all my supporting paragraphs truly support and back up my thesis? Revising Sentences Use parallelism to balance words and ideas: Keep voice and tense consistent. The mugger jumped out and scared her. The mugger jumped out and scares her. The mugger jumped out and she was scared. √ Revising Sentences Avoid … Nonstandard Expressions Standard Expressions slang clichés pretentious language wordiness can the noise freak out through thick and thin finalize initiate it is undoubtedly true that … = be quiet = get upset = through good times and bad = finish = begin = it is true that … Revising Sentences Use verbs. Passive The car was